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Yeah, it's early ;) My friend Maliyah300 was able to motivate me with her kind words. Another friend of mine, Animecat102 was able to help me decide that my pages are going to be a little longer from here on out. So I don't know if you'll think that is a bad thing or not, but to me, it's good. Because this means that Yami will be arriving twice as fast because I have decided to make the pages twice as long.

So, since the pages are longer, I think I little comic strip would be nice to celebrate. I went through so many roughs since I recovered from an art block and finally came up with this. It's different! But hey, that's what  AFFT is for. Fun, and experimenting ;) It's funny how different every drawing is from the one before. Well anyway, hope you like it!
 
WARNING
This page is very graphic and has foul language. I advice that if you are under 13, you should stop reading now!
Also, before you read ahead, you might have to refer to her transformation rules:
Jane's Transformations ~AFFT by MarieJane67777

Also, this scene is what the cover photo of the chapter describes;
AFFT Chapter 9 Page 98 by MarieJane67777
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Last Time On Another Feudal Fairy Tale
Inuyasha was able to follow Jane and Kagome into the dimension of what seemed to be a structural hive created by Loka. The demon was promised all of their Shykun Shards by Naraku as long as she tortured Inuyasha and his girlfriends. She quickly began this torture with honey wires and needles, making it a very uncomfortable, painful, and slow death. Kagome was able to figure out that it is the single red honey comb that is Loka's weakness but her arrow wasn't enough to bring it down. Upsetting Loka for getting close, she charged at Kagome beginning to beat her as her honey wires burnt Inuyasha and Jane.  When Inuyasha thought that it couldn't be worse, Jane began heating up as well and Kagome was screaming out in pain in the back ground. He tried to break lose, but Jane was not trying at all. When he looked into her eyes, he couldn't believe what he was seeing. They were glowing red.

Another Feudal Fairy Tale Chapter 9 Page 101 The end if Loka

Kagome's pov

One second Loka was on the other side of the hive and the next, she was right in front of me. I must have really upset her when I pierced the red honey comb because after I did, the entire room went red and she charged after me. When she reached me, she slapped me hard across the face and tightened the wires around me even more, crushing my legs. Then she grabbed me by the the roots of my hair, ripping it out as she looked at my face. She was laughing... laughing with her eyes as wide as they could go like the demon she is. She is absolutely insane. 

“Ha ha ha ha! I am going to have everything! Everything!” She said in a hard voice and then she hit my again. Does she honestly lose it over something that is honey coloured? I was crying in pain from her blows... her knuckle’s stingers stung me with every punch and my legs were going numb from having low blood circulation in my legs. Why didn't my arrow break the hive down? All I could do now was hope for the best.

Argh. She got me in a bad spot over my eye. I struggled to look up slightly at Inuyasha and Jane... my vision was blurry but even a blind person could see what was going on over there. It was hard to miss. Jane's hair and tail were flowing up like flames and Inuyasha looked like he was being burnt alive! He was trying to get away from her! She was glowing red now, here eyes like a demons. What was going on over there?

“Inu- Urgh!” Loka struck me right in the gut... I couldn't...think.. Inu...yasha...

....Time Skip...

Huh? Was I passed out long? I opened my eyes to see where I was. I was on the marble ground behind something...my vision is just starting to...focus... Inuyasha?

“Kagome, are you alright?!” He asked me when he noticed I was conscious. He was crouched next to me in a protective stance, looking at Jane who was a few feet away from us. She was fighting Loka by herself! And that wasn't the strange part. What...what was she wearing?

“Yeah I'm fine, what happened? Was I out long?” I asked, looking at Jane who was pinning Loka down and grabbing her head with both hands.

“No, just a few minutes. After you passed out, Jane completely exploded with flames, throwing me, the wires, AND Loka away from her. Then her clothes changed...”

Her clothes did change. She had a black long sleeved top with a skirt that resembled fire and red short cut boots. She was burning Loka's head with both her hands and her eyes were firing.

“Can I help her, Kagome? Will you be alright?” Inuyasha asked me. I pushed him with both hands.

“Of course I'm alright! GO!” I said in a hurry when I saw Loka knee Jane in the stomach and win the advantage in their brawl. Inuyasha nodded and left my side, wielding his tetseiga and telling Jane to get down. Then Loka laughed horribly and her stingers grew in size. She was just about to ruin Jane with them but lucky for her, Inuyasha made it on time and swung tetseiga at her.

Two against one made the match heavy enough to distract Loka so I looked around the hive quickly in search for my bow and there it was, covered in the sticky red honey on the other side of the room, surrounded by demon bees. I quickly stood up to run for it, but the moment I was on my feet, my legs failed me and I collapsed back on the ground. The bones on my legs were throbbing in pain and weren't functioning...were they...broken? This must have happened when Loka crushed my legs... This has to be one of my worst fights ever. I looked over at Jane and Inuyasha. Jane was throwing flames at Loka and Inuyasha was flaring tetseiga at her and she was countering with her wires by imprisoning tetseiga. Jane's new powers were helping by burning the honey but it wasn't enough. We have to get to the core weakness of this woman... I had to try the red honey comb one more time. But my arrow isn't strong enough on its own...we need to attack together. Then it hit me.

“Jane! The bow!” I told her and pointed to my weapon that was too far for me to reach. Jane nodded and started sprinting to it but Loka's demon bees stopped her. She used her hands to burn each one quickly, one at a time as she made her way through, fighting the hoard. Loka noticed this and sent her wires to grab Jane by the leg and smashed her against the honey combs over and over and with every smash, there was more blood. Loka's eyes were desperate now and she was using everything she had to continue to beat her down...she wasn't trying to torture Jane anymore. She was trying to kill her. Loka is going completely mad!

“Stop it!” I yelled. Inuyasha's sword was still tied up and forgotten when Inuyasha followed his instincts to save Jane as he ran his demon speed toward Loka.

“Iron Reaver Soul Stealer!” He ripped Loka's back apart and she fell to the ground in pieces, bleeding honey. We waited a few moments and it seemed to me that she was down. Inuyasha jumped over to me and quickly lifted me onto his back.

“You alright?” He asked me. I wanted to say yes, but that was too easy.

“I've seen better days.” I answered and he leaped over to Jane who was covered in bruises on the ground near the combs that she was being slammed into by Loka. Inuyasha reached for her.

“Can you stan-Argh!” He withdrew his hands like a snake the moment he had touched her.
“What the?”

“Nyhh...careful.” She said, struggling, “I'm really hot in this form.”

Well that explains why she had her hands on Loka's face before. Jane managed to stand on her own and she brushed her hair back as she gestured her head toward my bow. “Let's get out of here.”

As we started to look for an exit, Loka began laughing louder than ever!

“If you think this is over, you're sadly mistaken.” She said in a dark voice as she began to stand up and be healed by her bees. Inuyasha retrieved my bow quickly and was able to give it to me just in time before Loka held out her hand and shot out thousands of needles in our direction, throwing us back into the honey comb wall and penetrating us all over our bodies. Inuyasha was suddenly quieter than usual as Jane growled in irritation and held out her hand. It started glowing a red-orange as she focused and her growling got louder. I feel like both her and Inuyasha were getting ready for something, so I drew my bow just in case.

“Aim for the red honey comb!” I said, pointing my arrow at the ceiling. We have to strike together if this was going to work. I waited for their response but I got nothing.

“Inuyasha?” I turned to him and noticed the very familiar and unpleasant marks that have appeared on his cheeks. I hoped that I was seeing things...until his breathing becoming frighting.

“Jane?” I tried.

“....” She said something under her breath and then, just after, Loka came charging at us.


“HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!” Jane yelled, releasing the largest wave of smoke and flames possible toward Loka. I couldn't even see anything but her fire and I had to shut my eyes and hold my breath from the fumes! The heat was making me sweat and the smoke brought a few coughs out of me. After a few moments when it settled down, I looked at Jane and she still had her arms out, breathing heavily. I looked back at Loka and she was burnt from head to toe. She was so black that it looked like she was about to crumble to ashes.. But instead, her eyes grew and she just started laughing again.

Inuyasha didn't find it funny. In fact, at the same time she laughed, he roared his demonic roar and charged for her, attacking blindly...completely out of control. Now that he was away from tetseiga, there was no stopping him.

“Jane.” I said, grabbing her arm and burning myself.

“Don't touch me, Kagome!” She warned before her eyes were on Inuyasha again. She looked confused some how.

I pretended not to notice her gaze since there is very little time to explain. “Jane, we have to get the tetseiga back to Inuyasha, and we have to attack together! Loka's weakness is that honey comb, I know it!”

“Alright.” She stood up on her feet without questioning me. Her posture was serious. “Be safe.” She said, and she was lost from that spot so fast, I missed it. I focused my energy and purified my bow so that it was stronger and waited for Jane to return with Inuyasha.

When Jane got to the rusty sword, she held out her hand and curled her finger tips slowly, burning the honey wires that imprisoned it. When it was free, she grabbed it by the handle and ran over to Inuyasha.

“Inu-ah!” Inuyasha struck her to the ground before she was able to return the sword, striking her as hard as he had Loka. It hurt just to see it.

“SIT BOY!” I yelled and he was vulnerable. Jane wiped the blood away from her mouth with the back of her hand and forced him to take the sword just before she was caught into the fight with Loka when she was choked by the demon and her wires. My God, how I wish my legs weren't broken!

Inuyasha's eyes returned to normal and he stood up, realizing he was just a full demon and feeling horrible about it. He clenched his fist in frustration.

“Inuyasha! Get over here and bring Jane!” I yelled from the floor. This ought to distract him. He said yes with his eyes.

“Jane! Get down!” He warned and she instantly listened without even turning around to look at him, holding her arms over the back of her head as she slid to the ground.

“Adamant BARRAGE!” Inuyasha sent a hoard of diamonds, piercing every demon bee and incarcerating Loka in her own honey combs, giving us a perfect chance to stall for some time.

Inuyasha grabbed Jane by the arm to help her up but burned himself again.

“Grr, Damn it! Get up!” He yelled at Jane, frustrated with her new transformation. She got up  at her pace and they rushed over to me.

“You wont get away with this!” Loka said, struggling to free herself.

“Quickly! Jane can you shoot an arrow with your powers?” I asked, gesturing for her to take my bow.

“Not with that. It'll burn in my hands.” She replied. I thought quickly. We had little time.

“Ok, together now.” I said, drawing my bow while still sitting on the ground due to my aching legs. “Jane, we'll need your fire powers mixed with my spiritual powers. Inuyasha, you should involve the shiek jewel in this attack to give us an even better shot.”

Both of them nodded and Jane lit the arrow head with flames and kept her hand out, keeping them strong while Inuyasha pulled out tetseiga.

“Damn you!” Loka said, freeing herself.

“Ready?” She was coming for us.

“Now!” We yelled together. I released my arrow at the same time Jane sparked her flames larger and Inuyasha sent a wind scar. All of our powers hit the red honey comb and...... nothing happened? Are you serious? Loka started to laugh once more.

Suddenly... the honey comb began to crack and Lokas smile vanished.

“No! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!” She yelled. The honey comb came falling down and without her bees to heal her now, Loka was doomed. We knew we had won as she knelt in despair.

“MY HONEY!” She cried. And soon, that's all she was. A lonely pile of gunky honey on the marble floor, crushed by her own combs. After it was over, we remained still in the position that we were in for several moments before feeling free to move again. Jane fell to the ground beside me and rested her head back with a heavy sigh as Inuyasha sheathed his sword.

“How did you know?” Jane asked me.

“Hm?”

“How did you know...that Loka's weakness was the red honey comb?” She asked me.

“We faced someone like her before.” Inuyasha answered for me, smiling.

“A long time ago.” I agreed. “It's unreal how time goes by so fast, isn't it, Inuyasha?”

He nodded.

“How are your legs, Kagome?” Jane asked me. I rain-dropped.

“Definitely broken.” I said.

“Will fix you up when we get back.” Inuyasha said like it was no big deal. Half demons...

“And Sango?” I reminded them. They looked to the ground without a repose and I knew then that Sango was at greater risk than I.

“Let’s worry about returning to the others first.” Jane said.

“And the sooner you change back, the better. I don’t like you like this.” Inuyasha complained to Jane and she chuckled.

“I don't like you the way you were a few minutes ago... hit me again, and I'll fucking kill you, got it? Jane told him. He smiled in a challenging way.

“You kill me? Ya right.”

“Hello?” I interrupted. “Broken legs over here.”


That's all for now!!
I hope you enjoy AFFT!
Thanks for all the support! <3
Media: Copics, Ink
Time: 10 Hours (including the written part)

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OMG IT BEEN SO LONG SINCE I READ THIS STORY! 2014! I'M SO GOING TO READ THE OTHER'S IT BEEN TO LONG SINCE I READ MY FAVORITE STORY!