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Omg, 100 page :') wow. I can't believe this! What an accomplishment! 
Thanks so much for reading an supporting AFFT guys. It means the world to me! YOU mean the world to me!

The drawing was done on a sketch program I have on my laptop that came with my tablet. I did it quickly to submit it fast since i've been behind on the story! Well, here's page 100! It's short, but intense. I hope you like it!

WARNING
This page is very graphic and has foul language. I advice that if you are under 13, you should stop reading now!
Also, before you read ahead, you might have to refer to her transformation rules:
Jane's Transformations ~AFFT by MarieJane67777

Also, this scene is what the cover photo of the chapter describes;
AFFT Chapter 9 Page 98 by MarieJane67777

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Last Time On Another Feudal Fairy Tale
Thanks to Janes clumsiness, the gang damaged one of Lokas hives and greatly upset her. Outraged and provoked by the honeyed Shykun Jewel, Naraku influenced her to seize Jane and Kagome into another realm which, luckily for Inuyasha, was able to break through with his tetseiga. With all of the controversy, Sango was stung by one of Lokas larger bees and put under great stress and pain. Miroku morns for Sangos safety and Koga runs off in search of the rest of the hives to find and destroy them. Will Sango turn out okay? And most importantly, Will Inuyasha, Jane and Kagome make it back and survive Lokas madness? Find out next time on Another Feudal Fairy Tale!

Another Feudal Fairy Tale Chapter 9 Page 100
 
Inuyasha’s pov

Ever since I cut through to this dimension, I’ve been soaring through a pitch black of nothingness. Kagome and Jane have to be around her somewhere but there’s nothing! Suddenly I wasn’t soaring anymore, I was falling. As I fell, the darkness became a honey space that became brighter and brighter when suddenly I hit something hard face first. It felt just as though Kagome had cursed that unmentionable phrase to send me to my doom again.
Damn it all, where was I? I lifted my aching forehead off the ground that seemed to be as hard as rock and examined the area that I have arrived in. The floor was a shiny golden marble and the walls were plastered in honey combs that dripped of a sweet goo that was almost tempting to ingest. I had quickly realized where I was just as I spotted Jane a few meters away, sitting up and rubbing her knee caps, completely unaware of my presence. She must have fallen on them when she landed here. I assume she had just got over her symptoms from the sting earlier, so her senses aren’t all together.

“Inuyasha!” I heard Kagome call. Both Jane and I looked up to find Kagome stuck inside one of the honey combs completely fine. Oddly, that was a relief.. Jane had noticed me now and smiled out of ease as she started her way towards me and stopped when the ground shook. Seriously, Loka. Enough with the earth quakes! When the shaking stopped, Loka descended down from the ceiling a few feet on her honey wires and smirked at us. I was so ready to rip her apart.

“You call yourselves demons?” Loka started. I twitched. “You haven't even noticed that Naraku has taken your Shykun jewel shards right from under your noses.” WHAT? I quickly turned to look at Jane, hoping that Loka was bluffing. Jane looked at me with sorrowful eyes and I couldn't help but clench my fists till my claws stabbed my flesh.

“Naraku promised to keep them on hold for me as long as I promised to torture Inuyasha and his girlfriends.” Loka said. I ignored her comment and turned to Jane.

“Change into your water form so we can get Kagome out of the honey comb!” I told her right before I drew my tetseiga and leaped toward Loka. She held her hand out suddenly and a hoard of demon bees and honey wires flew to my direction, sticking themselves onto my fire rat kimono. It was hopeless to escape, I was tied and glued to these things. They held me in the air just a few meters in front of Loka and it was pissing me off. At that moment, I looked at Jane who was still in her default form, climbing the honey combs toward Kagome.

“I thought I told you to change!” I yelled at her.

“ I can't!” She yelled back. What is she talking about?

“What do you mean, you can't?”

“Do you SEE any water nearby? I can't change without water!” Okay, I forgot. But at this point, she reached Kagome and was trying to pull her out when Loka noticed and sent the same nuisance to her as she did to me. She pulled Jane away from Kagome so fast, slamming her hard against me. We bumped heads and groaned while Loka pulled on the wires so that we were bonded tight against one another. It didn't hurt, but it was incredibly uncomfortable to be tied up against a female 20 feet in the air while all you can smell is honey... the last part is worse than you would think with my nose. Loka started laughing at this point and all I could focus on was being as tense as I could. I felt that if any sign of easiness came from me, it would disrespect the hard headed woman who's body was as close to mine as one could get, and it was hard to think about anything else. I could feel her trying to pull away, but it was hopeless.

“Now how should I start this. Bee stings? No, not on demons...that wouldn't take much of an effect now would it?” Was Loka seriously debating on how to start our torture? As much as I want to judge her strength as a minority, I can't ignore the fact that she was able to rip through dimensions...which is something only elite demons can do. That means, things aren't looking too good for us.

“I know! How about we start with a little blood shed?” Loka said when suddenly, her honey wires sprouted thorns and pierced Jane and I as they grew in size. This may not have been the worst pain in my life but it was definitely up there with some of the worst. Jane squealed when the thorns stabbed her back and even though I didn't yelp, I could understand her. The thorns were growing and stabbing us slowly, and that's what killed. Loka was planning to make this very slow and I could smell Jane's blood beginning to surface. When the thorns stopped growing, Jane and I both let out a heavy sigh of discomfort and Kagome started yelling.

“Stop it!!” She yelled as loud as her lungs could manage. “You have nothing to gain from this!”

Loka brought a honey wire to Kagome's face and silenced her by rapping it around her head over her mouth. This pissed me off.

“Don't you dare mess with Kagome!” I growled and Loka gave me a spiteful look. Kagome was lucky that she wasn't silenced with the spiked wires, at least.

“What was that, half demon?” She said as she pulled at our wires, tightening the closeness between Jane and I, causing greater discomfort and for the thorns to stab deeper. Urgh, this was bad.

“It's-” Jane started, sounding like it was taking everything she had to speak. “It's getting to be a bit much.”

“Just hang on! Don't faint, got that?” Jane's eyes were rolling backwards every so often and her breathing was unsteady. Was Jane the type to pass out so easily over blood? A fighter like herself? This was bad.
My nose was burning on the inside. The mixed smell of our blood and the demonic honey was sanding my brain and it was difficult to breath when the air was so contaminated. Jane's blood was already starting to trickle out from her wounds and staining my kimono a darker shade red. Jane looked like she was finished, but it seemed Loka wanted her to be awake for her torture, because at that moment, Loka withdrew the thorns, knowing it was causing Jane to become unconscious.

“I feel that this is more appropriate.” The bitch said just as she tightened the wires heavily, crushing our ribs and pulling the wires down, slapping us against the marbled floor as she laughed. We landed on our side, both of us getting an equal amount of pain from the impact. Our blood smeared on the floor, but the bleeding was slowing down and Jane's awareness was coming back. She found the strength to turn her head to look at me.

“I've never felt so useless in a battle...” She told me in a breathy voice.

“Tsk!” I brushed it off, “please. You're always useless.”

I felt her fist clenching, but he strength was minimal. It looked to me like she was trying to active her bracelet to transform...

Suddenly I heard the sound that brings nerves to my stomach. The sound of something being purified. I quickly turned to look at Kagome from the ground and saw that she had purified the demonic honey that was imprisoning her, and she fell to the ground. It was hard to hear anything else over the buzzing of the millions of bees that were in this place. She quickly started sprinting for our direction, but Loka stopped her with more wires, tying her to the honey comb wall again. Although this time she was tied from the waste down, having her arms free for a bow which she drew and prepared. I had to stretch my neck to see this and it was taking too much strength to watch Kagome now, so I turned back around and collapsed my muscles. Jane was still in horrible shape, trying to change, but failing. I heard Kagome release her arrow, the sound of light and grace shooting past us and toward Loka. I could see the arrow now, piercing the single red honey come in the ceiling which I have failed to notice before. Was that where I fell from?

“You're a relative of Yura of the hair, aren't you?” Kagome asked, determined.

“You little shit!” Loka was furious than ever that Kagome made the shot. Her anger burned in the room, tinting everything that was yellow to red. And then she rushed over to Kagome, where I was unable to see.

Suddenly, I felt like the honey strings were getting warm...getting warmer...

“Oh no...” I heard Jane whisper.

The wires were getting hot now... and hotter.. and really hot. They were burning us.
The pain was unreal, and to make it worse, I could her Kagome screaming behind me. I wanted to scream myself. When the hell did I become so helpless?

“Jane?” I said when I noticed she had stopped groaning and moving. She was still for several moments. How could she remain so still when even I was squirming from the fire rings that used to be honey?

“Jane! Don't screw with me! Wake up!” I yelled accidentally in the rhythm of Kagome's screaming torture.

Jane stayed quiet and was warming up. Warming up just as the honey was. She was getting hot, and hotter... she was hotter than the wires now! What was going on?

“Jane, you're burning me! Are you okay? JANE!” I yelled. She looked up at me with a blank expression. Her eyes were red.  

That's all for now!!
I hope you enjoy AFFT!
Thanks for all the support! <3

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FMAandYGO5dsgirl's avatar
Oh my goodness! This battle is getting good! Come on Jane! Go kick her butt!

Great job on this page! ♥ I can't wait for more!