AFFT ch 1 Pg 13

This is a FanFiction that took me 2 years to come up with and im still not done. This is only the first few pages. i havn't done anymore, but i got the whole storyline in my head. SO i got a question i need to ask.

Should i continue?

AFFT stands for Another Feudal Fairy Tale (if ur wondering)

This is a fanmanga on Inuyasha. Now the begining of this story is very crappy. It gets better and better like if u think its good now, it gets better.

Oh for those of you who hav seen my art, probably already know who she is. Anyway answer my question Oh and tell me what you think of not only the story, BUT the illustrationss too.

Inuyasha (c) Rumiko
AFFT (c) Me
to see mroe of the manga here: [link]